Romeo and Julius - Page One

Wee...so I started this comic over a year ago but got really depressed that the art and storyline sucked too much and stopped after two pages. But recently I've decided that even if they do suck, I'm going to practice until I get better, and I'd like it if you guys could help me along the way. I actually own a domain for the site but I don't know how to make a website, so I'm hosting the comic on comic genesis (previously known as keenspace) for now, it's [link] and I'd love it if you could tell me how I'm doing. I'm still figuring out panel design, how to use digital tone, etc., and of course always working to draw better. Enough whining, anyhow x.x This and page two were done a year ago, so forgive me for their suckiness...not that the new pages are much better x.x